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Comment by: kc0003 - 2008-09-11 11:57
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| i like the soft feel of this...even with the hint of taboo...nice write |
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Comment by: Apollo - 2008-08-25 23:06
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| I like the personification of the moon, feels very serene... |
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| Kudos to the great read, minor details may need to be touched up but if your happy with it I don't see any need to change it. |
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Comment by: douglas - 2008-07-21 06:03
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| Sensuously composed and written. You clearly do have a poetic soul. |
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Comment by: Kav - 2008-07-21 05:15
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| lovely poem, this has great flow and nice imagery. thanks for the read |
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