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mommaZ82
Zandra Melis
United States, NY, Ithaca

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what do we know?

what explains the darkness
or why the trees are green
what explains happiness
and still needing someone to lean
what do we really know
about friendship, love, and sadness
maybe someday soon
we'll figure out the madness

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redtwinsis Comment by: redtwinsis - 2008-01-11 06:59
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Well written I like this piece:)
Anne Comment by: Anne - 2007-02-16 07:27
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love it. well done
Comment by: - 2007-02-05 14:07
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short, sweet and to the point. very nice.
sudipal Comment by: sudipal - 2007-02-04 17:55
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I really enjoyed this.
cristinabejar Comment by: cristinabejar - 2007-02-02 23:15
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it's sweet. I like it except for the line: still needing someone to lean--it sounds like it was forced to rhyme. But I like the general thought.
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