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dumbwaiters
Eric Corthell
United States, ohio, Westerville

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No Way To Live

No Way To Live

And now I miss you
Before you’re even gone
Cause your never around anymore
But even when you were
Always here with me
Well I still did even then

Take that first and final kiss
You know, the one that never was
It still keeps me up at night
Never letting me sleep
Only letting me dream
But then that’s how I live my life

I know we’ve all changed
But I’m still the same
I’m always the same around you
Do you remember the time?
Oh tell me where to go
Tell me where did I go wrong?

From that first and final kiss
You know, the one that never was
It still keeps me up at night
Never letting me sleep
Only letting me dream
But that’s how I live my life

This sure was nice now
This time together
I hope we can do it again
Maybe next time
I can make it
So sorry to leave you alone

Oh that first and final kiss
That one that never was
It still keeps me up at night
Never letting me sleep
Only making me dream
I tell you it’s no way
Its’ now way
It’s now way
To live a life…

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sydni Comment by: sydni - 2008-08-03 19:24
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When I read this, the most powerful verse seems to be that first one acting as a precursor for the rest of the poem. Nicely written and nice job on the structure. This is as enjoyable to read as it is compelling!
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