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MsWizard
Alicia Wizard
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United States, WA, Seattle

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This is My Beloved

Blue skies shining
Into grass green
Crystalline orbs

Butterfly soft caresses
Delicately dancing
On a single bud

Eager mouth gentle
Nipping kisses awakening
Dormant desires

Head lowered
Languidly
Sipping of my love

Warm sinew securing
Soft sinuous
Femininity

A calming sea
In the eye of my
Tumultuous storm

And this
Is my Beloved.

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MsWizard Comment by: MsWizard Online- 2008-07-24 15:29
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Thank you Fisherman, that is very kind of you to say so....I'm pleased you enjoyed this...
fisherman1369 Comment by: fisherman1369 Online- 2008-07-24 15:21
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I just read your latest posting and am very impressed. You have a wonderful way of painting a picture with words. You are a very good poet. Very sensual.
MsWizard Comment by: MsWizard Online- 2008-07-24 06:41
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Thank you Wilde....I'm not sure I've ascended to anything actually, but I am contented with this one.....
Wildefriend Comment by: Wildefriend - 2008-07-23 17:44
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This is superb! You are quickly moving up in the poetic world! The rhythms and images are truly marvelous. You have ascended to a new level.
You don't need to look back anymore.
MsWizard Comment by: MsWizard Online- 2008-07-23 13:22
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Oh thank you Wanda...I love this one but I was not sure if it was too quiet or understated...
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