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Alien Challenge 20: The Last Line
A cat jumped on a sill,
Not much smarter than a pill.
She fell to the ground,
With a terrible sound,
But she was still
Brighter than sunshine.
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Comment by: Juan2 - 2008-07-30 19:43
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That cat doesn't seem none too bright, falling to the ground like that :)
happy writings. |
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Comment by: alien Online- 2008-07-28 12:28
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| A strange little poem but it made me smile. |
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Comment by: Arley - 2008-07-24 10:46
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| Heh heh, got ‘er mixed up, Vy. Swap THE and To. |
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Comment by: Arley - 2008-07-24 08:19
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I see you know my cat, heh heh.
She fell the ground,
(Believe you meant to say TO the ground) |
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