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Gently gravity
pulls her silent painful tears
places unguarded
07/23/2008
(A very special thank you to skypoetone for helping with my first haiku attempt.)
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Yes... nice one Bebe! I did want to read "unguarded" for some reason, but I know that added an extra syllable and you may not have wanted the word anyway. ~T
