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Lenny
Lenny Gazbowski
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United Kingdom, Liverpool

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Mine Alone

this is my
tragedy

this is my
pain

keep your
words
away from my
gaping wounds

I’ve suffered
enough

without
your vicious
tongue

cutting

deeper

into my new born scars

(C)2007.Lenny Gazbowski

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Lenny Comment by: Lenny Online- 2008-08-03 10:39
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thanks for your comments,very much appreciated.
GreenIce Comment by: GreenIce Online- 2008-08-02 22:04
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I like this... You describe it nicely.."vicious tongue" i like that...

"keep your words away from my gaping wounds"

Tis true....Even I, when in public...I get anxiety about what others might say to me, when i am already fragile...like...it could break me..easy..which is why I probably hide away more then I should...but..I understand this poem alot..which is why I wanted to comment..reminded me of how I am...

*hugs* written nicely.
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