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mommaZ82
Zandra Melis
United States, NY, Ithaca

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My big mistake

Dear Friend,

I can't believe everyone found out! I am single so it really shouldn't matter. But let me tell you what I did last weekend.

I was at S's house, as usual, and we were doing what we always do. We smoked weed all night while playing spades and drinking. We were sharing our latest love stories and experiences. I didn't have anything to share because I have been single for about a month. But listening to them was making me hot.

My usual "fuck buddy" was currently in a relationship so I wasn't getting any from him. I had two choices that night, and I really should have thought before I made the one I did.

You know Kieth. He is kinda the one everyone likes, but would NEVER hook up with. Well, he had been talking about eating this random chick out all night. It made me want to be ate. So, I waited untill everyone was asleep.

I got up from my where I was sleeping and went to the bathroom. Freshened up down there, and made sure that when I walked past him he noticed me. He did and followed me back into the room I had chosen for the night.

He went to kiss me when we laid down together. I stopped him and told him all I wanted was to get off by his tounge and nothing more. And he did. I tell you it was great! I was so aroused that I got off like 3 times before I made him stop. Then he looked at me and I wondered to myself what the hell I was doing.

I went home the next day wondering what I would say if someone asked. And then I got a phone call. Nick called me and told me I was a "dirty bitch". "How could you mess with Kieth?"

I lied. But then he told me about the mole on my cheek. I was caught.

It will take a while to redeem myself in thier eyes. But to be honest it was worth the humiliation.

More Later,

Zandra

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Comment by: - 2007-02-05 14:07
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hmmm...too much information? haha. well, i read it, so that's my problem. this was written well, so...nicely done. very interesting, to say the least.
MaggieMay Comment by: MaggieMay - 2006-07-15 11:01
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intresting.. to say the very very very very very least :-P

I don't know what to say.. i'm in agreeance with lukewest.. *whistles to self* so have i written 20 words yet *uncomfortable silence.

anyways.

thank you very much for the read. it was well written.
ChrisHately Comment by: ChrisHately - 2006-03-08 05:45
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Er...okay...interesting, and well written, as a blog, but...did we need to know? :s

Anyway, welcome :)
lukewest Comment by: lukewest - 2006-03-05 20:49
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Well, that is very different to alot of the stories on this site. LOL. I honestly don't no what to say. I'm lost for words. Keep up the good work, and good luck with your upcoming sex life.
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