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Comment by: Lenny - 2008-08-05 17:13
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| I would like to say a big thanks to you all for your comments,very much appreciated as always. |
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Comment by: Kav Online- 2008-08-04 05:07
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| An absolutely fantastic poem, very inspiring and full of hope. Can't really think of anything else to say or change. Loved it |
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| A poem about responsibility and taking the front, as well as realizing that just because a person is at the front does not mean they lead well or even morally. A cry for a new beginning a plea for the end of tyranny. An interesting read. I hope I’m not wrong in making one suggestion but did you intentionally use the word “were” rather than “where” because it doesn’t fit “were” being a form of the word “be”. I think you meant “where” and that is how I read it. |
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excellent!
like he said, connection and relation with the everyday individual and the person of power... love it! |
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| very elegant. I love how you relate the political with the every day people. Well done. |
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