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heartless
Aska Me
Australia

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They call it 'Your Other Half'

Untouched,
from the world, silenced
I sit here watching and waiting for my own
to come, and make me into something, I do not know
what of I speak,
my mind, dazed
my heart,
no more

Struggling to find my own,
sense
of self,
I watch you sit there, in deep thoughts of
unworthy topics,
shallowminded, unaffected by the greater things,
things we cannot change, nor predict

Yet another new,
yet another excitement, into the unknown I head,
yet another dissapointment.
yet another you, but the same old me.
There is no one else, no 'other half',
only me

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heartless Comment by: heartless - 2008-09-07 02:05
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thanks carey, ..yes we all do :(
fisherman1369 Comment by: fisherman1369 - 2008-09-06 15:01
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Ahh, the 'joy' of searching for another love. All of us experience this and you express it so wonderfully. We must keep searching for our own light to hold the darkness of being alone at bay. Great job.
Carey
heartless Comment by: heartless - 2008-08-06 21:16
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oh thank you. :) ...i think sometimes when I'm feeling like that, the best way to let it out is through writing it
acid43 Comment by: acid43 - 2008-08-04 21:11
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this was a good piece of poetry,you always have a way of conveying lonliness in your poems.I really feel you are a great poet. Good work
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