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Roses, violets, stars, and wells
Roses are red, Violets are blue
But they mean nothing with out you
With out you, the flowers I cant give
With out you its harder to live
The roses are bland, the violets are pale
They only have worth when its you I hail
The roses can prick, those violets can weep
I feel that your company is the best I keep
I hope all day, I pray all night
To see your smile shimmer so bright
I wish on the stars, I wish in the well
That you share my feelings as well
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| ahahahahahahahahhahhahaahahahahaha ur gay |
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| http://www.maniacworld.com/pigeons-vs-man.html |
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i think i just got a warm feeling inside
the thing is determining it from indigestion and/or warmth from love
ahah
either way i really enjoyed this |
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| Well thats kinda what I was going for, it looks like one of those crappy rose/violets poems, but it means alot more... thanks alot |
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Dude I thought this was gonna be another roses are red violets are blue poem when I read the first line but it really proved me wrong.
This poem was very nicely written in my opinion. I haven't read one this good in a while. Its definitely going in my library.
Regards CP =] |
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