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jcp200817
Carlos Perez
United States, NC, Dobson

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Poke

Do you know what I have done,
I've tattooed your name
right here on my right hand
so everyone will know about you.

I didn't have money so I couldn't
get it done by a professional.
I settled on a needle and ink
slowly and meticulously I poked myself.

3000 pokes and 50 minutes later
I finished your name and with that
you were forever etched upon my being.
I just hope it doesn't get infected.

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FakeSmile Comment by: FakeSmile - 2008-08-01 07:14
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hahaha.....wow....i thought i was the only crazii wacko person that did that....make them wiht ink and needle :D

guess not
Zaelus Comment by: Zaelus - 2008-08-01 00:48
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nice. i like that there is double meaning to the tattoo getting infected
thatonekid Comment by: thatonekid - 2008-07-31 07:54
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haha, no kidding right. good luck man
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