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Kav
Kavita Trivedi
United Kingdom, London

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Bucks Fizz ©

Bubbles fill my nostrils,
Eyes water, I choke,
Collapse with hilarity

Bare feet, immersed into
the moist soil of the Earth

hair a shrivelled mess,
coarse from the rainfall

though I care not, neither do you,
for you see through the window,
peep into my soul

beyond the painted face,
you see the real me
young, naïve and carefree


You are a cocktail, a real corker!
you pop, fizz and sparkle

putting a smile on my face,
you brighten up my day

Oh you are a revelation!
A celebration… of life, of
awesomeness

I raise my mug, full, fizzing at
the brim,
I toast to you my dearest,
my friend, sister, my saviour


for all the fun and folly,
for all the happiness and sorrow

may we enjoy many moments
like this

where our friendship continues
to blossom… until eternity



KT 31.07.08

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junenandy Comment by: junenandy - 2008-07-31 18:37
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This is beautiful and nostalgic. Great work.
Artorius Comment by: Artorius - 2008-07-31 12:50
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I think you captured the feeling of a memory well in this, well done.
Kav Comment by: Kav - 2008-07-31 11:37
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thanks Doug miss those days too!
Wildefriend Comment by: Wildefriend Online- 2008-07-31 08:37
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A wonderfully humorous and perceptive take on the good ol' days as they were. Lots of fun here too. Excellent job!
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