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Lloyd Lofthouse
United States, Califoronia, Walnut Creek

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A Necessary Death

I witnessed a brutal murder
Walking home
From the Sunday farmers’ market
And did nothing.

The temperature was
In the nineties.
The sun beat the pavement
Without mercy
Heating the bottoms of my feet
Through my soles.

I stood on the sidewalk
Under that sun,
A voyeur
Along with two men
Taking a break
From mowing lawns.

We watched,
Fascinated,
From beginning to end
That robin,
Or was it a blue jay,
I can’t remember,
On the limb of
That shady tree
Plucking out the eyes,
The brain,
The inner organs
Until only the skin remained
From what had been
A field mouse.

The bird slipped
The mouse pelt
Onto a broken twig
Jutting from the branch.
What was left of a life
Hung like a winter overcoat,
A mouse pelt jacket,
Waiting
To keep a bird warm
So it didn’t have to
Fly south
For the winter.

The cost of jet fuel
Is expensive even
For economy class.

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scottishsong Comment by: scottishsong - 2008-08-05 21:35
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I love the part where the pelt hung like an overcoat... good imagery if not lightly morbid.
egoyibo Comment by: egoyibo - 2008-08-01 08:06
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nice poem.nice point of view.if animals know what a crime it is to do some things they do then there wont be any need for strict liability imposed on humans for some "dangerous" animals.keep up the good work my friend
skypoetone Comment by: skypoetone Online- 2008-08-01 05:31
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Funny how perceptions can be isn't it? I liked this poem very much, not that the bird would have a notion to its 'crime'. It brings to mind one I wrote "A Crimson Season". Thanks for a great read. ~T
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