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Caught In a Moment
Even though it's been
only a while
just some time spent
together, I wouldn't
trade it for anything,
nor ever repent.
The memories may parch,
and to survive,
one may need to screen
But I'm content
that in this world where few meet
as they truly are,
we were blessed
to be caught in a moment'¦
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Comment by: madmonk - 2008-01-03 23:17
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| Good flow of thoughts, liked it. |
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| i disagree with everyone who said this poem needed more....it should be appreciated as is because it is excellent. |
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Comment by: manoj - 2007-03-29 04:40
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| lovely poem... liked. |
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| I was caught in the vision and did not want it to end. |
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| This is really beautiful. I agree, it should be a bit longer, perhaps, only a stanza or so though, just cause, I was wishing for more at the end, because it was that beautiful. |
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