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Zed
Zita Killeen
United Kingdom, Wimborne

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Access: Public
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The Begining

That sparkle in the eye
Lights up with each smile
The shy laughter
Lifts my heart

Anticipation of meeting again
Builds up inside
Each Hello makes me glow
With each Goodbye, I smile
My face has re-lit
Life is good
The sun shines

A gentle hug feels so right
Words spoken are special
Being patient is testing
Such longing for more

His welcome so precious
Is keeping me glowing
So easy to speak to
His honesty so fine.
We both understand
Such empathy and connection
I feel for this man.

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Zed Comment by: Zed - 2008-08-01 02:18
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Thank you SO much Artorius. Great to know my words have expressed my feelings!
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Artorius Comment by: Artorius - 2008-07-31 16:23
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Oooh, interesting, who is this man? NO,don't answer, it's better not to know ;-) Anyways, I like it, it's kind of exciting, sweet, gives you that feeling when you first meet a man who catches your attention.
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