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Lloyd Lofthouse
United States, Califoronia, Walnut Creek

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The Lost Scent of Orange Blossoms

I grew up in
Southern California
Where my family
Ate home cooked
Meals together.

That world died
A horrible, slow death.
Murdered
Like in a horror movie—
A corporate hit job.
Bulldozers and chain saws
Killed it and
Dragged the corpses off
Without a trial.

The replacements were
Televisions,
Fast food,
Video games,
Internet;
Reality shows.

Back in that magical,
Childhood kingdom
Where kids cultivated imaginations
There was an orange grove
Across the street.

The tree man
In kaki pants
And black boots said
We could have
The ones on the ground.

My rule of thumb was simple:
Squat and look for kaki pants.

There’s nothing sweeter
Than untouched
Whale sized oranges
Knocked off a tree
With a stick.

Suck juice from naval first.

The groves
Became strip malls,
Cloned houses,
Condos;
Grade schools.

The fresh air
Turned purple—
The dirt covered
With dead
Streets and parking lots.

Those orange trees
Tore their roots
From the ground and
Migrated south of the border
Without a visa
Thinking of cheap labor
And short-term profits.

No wonder a couple of kids
Went nuts at Columbine.

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fureyaersoy Comment by: fureyaersoy - 2008-08-12 01:10
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All around the world similar changes left many children heart broken while their small secure worlds shattering into pieces. Your poem describes it so beautifully. Well done.
fureya
skypoetone Comment by: skypoetone Online- 2008-08-01 15:54
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The ever-changing face of social behaviour and changes of attitude continue don't they... I liked the way you traversed from the home cooking to cheap labour with a multitude of sins between, and yet, while we decline as a society we move forward at breakneck speed technologically. The world is a scary place to be at times! ~T
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