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Lenny
Lenny Gazbowski
United Kingdom, Liverpool

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god and a game of golf

i painted my crucifix

bought my own
crown of thorns

even self flagellated
and still I died alone

how i wanted
to hear the crowds
chanting my name

even mistake me
for the son of god

anyone for a game of golf


(C)Lenny Gazbowski

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Lenny Comment by: Lenny - 2008-08-02 08:19
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cheers! I like this short poem!Made me laugh, I know - I wrote it! Would have liked to have done it live!
skypoetone Comment by: skypoetone Online- 2008-08-01 16:35
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You must have really wanted to be good... funny AND ironic. :) ~T
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