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Kav
Kavita Trivedi
United Kingdom, London

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I See You ©

Stood there,
Staring into oblivion,

a gaze, as cold
as ice
Oblivious to time, to
surroundings,

Yet I still see you

The mirror is shattered
But your reflection still shines
through

a face full of regret, pale
with fear, pain in your eyes….

I see you,

you gawp back
you reach out, touch,
I know you…

for you are no stranger…
for you, are me

KT 2.8.08

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rohitsapra Comment by: rohitsapra - 2008-11-14 11:09
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This is a nice poem. Liked reading it.
Kav Comment by: Kav - 2008-08-05 01:46
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Sandesh have changed that line was a typo

thanks again
prolificsantu Comment by: prolificsantu - 2008-08-04 21:10
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wow! very good piece in deed. see oneself feeling as if seeing someone else is the striking idea...it is always marvelous to dig out the history of our own...there still something missing...so a gaze, as cold as ice Oblivious and ignorant
Artorius Comment by: Artorius - 2008-08-04 11:26
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A very honest viewing of one's self, I think this is something most people do practically everyday, stare in the mirror and see everything that only that person can see reflected back from the inside out, very good.
Kav Comment by: Kav - 2008-08-02 09:37
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Thanks for the comment Lenny
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