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Bow Legs (Haiku)

Crickets scratching legs
together, making music
resonate sound waves.

08/02/2008

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Comment by: fisherman1369 - 2008-08-09 02:50

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Good comparison between cricket legs and the bow of a violin.

Comment by: bebelestrange - 2008-08-02 14:18

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Ohhh, you've already read about the frogs. That is when you requested those damn crickets...it's all your fault!ha! Thanks-T:}

Comment by: skypoetone Online- 2008-08-02 13:03

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and the frogs...nooo, skip the darn frogs hehe... lovely Bebe. I was wondering when I read the title... cute!

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