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bebelestrange
Bebe Lestrange
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Patiently Awating (Haiku)

Lonely flower waits
fresh spring showers, bringing forth
arrival anew.


08/02/2008

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bebelestrange Comment by: bebelestrange - 2008-08-02 15:06
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Very insightful, writer82, just as we need our life source; We often times lose ground, die back! This patient flower also waits for another when it's drink comes.:}
writer82 Comment by: writer82 - 2008-08-02 14:17
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We could all learn patience from flowers growing in the wild: they wait for the rain, the source of life. Here's hoping our resolve doesn't wither before the shower comes!
bebelestrange Comment by: bebelestrange - 2008-08-02 14:13
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Precisely...I'll just stay in for mine. Be safe. :}
skypoetone Comment by: skypoetone Online- 2008-08-02 13:00
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Just like us, waiting for that refreshing nectar... quite apt as I'm going out for a drink soon. :)
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