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FantasticFantasy
Raven Coleman
United States, North Carolina, Hole in the Wall

Words: 190
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Comments: 8

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THE MACHINE

The machine's primary function was to keep her asleep.
But it failed. It's all over now....

Everyone I know is dead, and she killed them.

They built the machine on the island so if something like this happened, she would be contained here.
I wish she had never been created.

They called themselves "Pioneers of Science", but they didn't know anything. They didn't know that when they created her that she would be so strong; that she could overwrite the systems like that.

It was like nothing we had ever seen.

The day had started off normal enough.
We planned to go straight to the labs from our bunks, as we had always done. But something was different... You could feel it in the air; we all could.

It was saturated with anger.

A few of the older ones went to check on the labs.
Then we heard the screams and the noises; we knew they weren't coming back.

We sent more.
They didn't come back either.

Now it's just me, and she's out there somewhere.

Waiting.
Waiting for me

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bookwormtom Comment by: bookwormtom - 2008-08-26 02:57
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Oh that was awesome! If there is one thing more terrifying than something you can see and something you know, it is something unknown that you cannot see, lurking in the darkness, around the corner... in the screams...

Brilliant.
fang13bea Comment by: fang13bea Online- 2008-08-08 21:00
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Oh cool, it's a girl that kills everyone. That's hardcore, I love it when girl's kill people. Wow, I just sounded like a dude...
F I Z Z Comment by: F I Z Z - 2008-08-06 14:44
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Interesting!
I like how you left it up to us to use our imaginations as to what happens to him. :]
Good job!
FantasticFantasy Comment by: FantasticFantasy - 2008-08-03 22:38
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You decide what happenes to him.
:D
I wanted to leave it open to interpretaion.
jcp200817 Comment by: jcp200817 - 2008-08-03 22:37
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I don't think that a backstory was needed. It works pretty well in itself. I do wish however that you had added more. I want to know what happens to the guy. Great write nonetheless. Regards CP
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