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Sharon Harriott
United Kingdom, London

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The Peace

Dawn light chased the flaws
Down the bottom of the bed.
Guilt’s flight closed the doors,
Offering solace instead.

Here we are breeze kissed,
Naked skin exposed in light.
Crumpled sheets not missed,
Faulty notion of respite.

No mind for blind peace,
That fake gossamer promise.
As long as lies cease,
Dark in light garb is what is.

Dust moats catch my gaze;
You move just as self-assured.
Make sure silence stays,
I can be your most adored.






Sharon Harriott
July 28, 2008

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CrackaZach Comment by: CrackaZach - 2008-10-26 16:06
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though redundant, i feel it necessary to let you know how great the imagery is, and verb you give to the images are clever.
wizzer Comment by: wizzer Online- 2008-08-28 17:36
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the mood! the expression! the visuals you give
so lovely
xxgeo
mitra Comment by: mitra - 2008-08-13 23:46
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This is lovely. Very careful with choice of words, it brings out the emotion and mood of the piece so well. Well done. :)
SnowflakeRose Comment by: SnowflakeRose - 2008-08-03 11:31
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Great job. Its a refreshing look at new love.
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