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As the darkness surrounds me I find myself unable to breathe
As I fall to my knees weeping the tears
I reach out so you can help me but you turn your back
And I shatter into a million pieces
I feel the hurt and the torment as you walk away
I feel the anger that the sorrow has bought
I look around for something to hold on to put I only find the agony
I am alone unable to be loved
As you walk out you take my soul, my love, and my life
Now I am nothing
I feel naught but the anguish you have left
The heartache is to great I feel worthless with out you
And all you can do is walk away…
Holly Sue Kay
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Your poem has made me feel your grief, in a sense of speaking. Yet I want to encourage you, be strong girl. Don't let it get the best of you. Remember time heals all wounds.
