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FantasticFantasy
Raven Coleman
United States, North Carolina, Hole in the Wall

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Food doesn't patch a broken heart.

I hate you.
I hate that I can say that.
You did this to me.
You made me like this;
stuck in a shell.

I want to be free
from this weight.

I want to be skinny.

But I can't.

You left
a giant
hole
in my heart.
BOTH
of you.

I just kept filing it with food.

Now 200 pounds later, I realize that only
I
am to blame.

It sucks to know
that your biological parents don't even
care
enough
to support you.

I'm losing this baggage,
WITHOUT
you, and
it makes me
so
damn
happy.

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Psyfyman81 Comment by: Psyfyman81 - 2008-08-04 22:11
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It's dark, it's thought provoking, good idea... I enjoy stuff that is like a pun...
Kav Comment by: Kav - 2008-08-04 04:58
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Good on you!

Thanks for the read
bebelestrange Comment by: bebelestrange - 2008-08-04 02:01
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Go for it!:}
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