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heidiheimler
heidi heimler
United States, WI, milwaukee

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For Dreams

I dreamt of a vessel
For dreams.

A wide-mouthed urn of
Ancient stone,
Worn but sturdy
Always ready for more.

A container for dreams that
Never came true.

Inside was a woman
Wrapped in a lover’s embrace.
In the morning she lay crying,
Bruised, abused, broken.
Alone.

A man walked
Along a deserted beach.
By day he rubbed salve
Into the raw spots
On his stump
Where the new prosthesis
Chafed.

A young girl giggled,
Trolled the mall with her friends.
At school, she winced from
Whispers, taunts and
Ugly words.

I wondered which one
Of my dreams
Would end up stored for eternity,
In the vessel for dreams that
Never came true.

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autodepressive Comment by: autodepressive - 2008-08-18 16:24
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i imagine myself sneaking a peak into this marvelous vessel, and i believe i will have nightmares tonight.
bitch...:D
Nishant Garg89 Comment by: Nishant Garg89 - 2008-08-17 03:32
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hi..that poem was nice, some lines touched me. like that para abt a young gal at school. gud job.
Dylan Di Vilde Comment by: Dylan Di Vilde - 2008-08-08 05:48
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Heidi,
This is deep and dark and full of mystery. I’m not sure I get all the imagery but then they’re your dreams not mine.

Great read
Dylan
skypoetone Comment by: skypoetone Online- 2008-08-04 11:36
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New perceptions, misfortunes of non-existent souls, entirely created to make us think... I'm sure morals for each of these stories also exist... I'd like to think so. Great read ~T
junenandy Comment by: junenandy - 2008-08-04 10:28
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This was clever. Dreams with in a dream. But the wide mouthed Urn was ready for more. I'd have filled it up with more. Little dark yet lovely. Thanks.

My fav.was the signature line:
" I dreamt of a vessel
For dreams"
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