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jcp200817
Carlos Perez
United States, NC, Dobson

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Memories Of You

Do you ever go back and
look through the things that I
gave you and just think.

Think of how things
used to be back
during those days of bliss.

I admit that I've
re-read over all the
letters you sent me.

I've read our Yahoo IM
conversations from the archive
laughing out loud at the things we said.

Sometimes I get so
overcome by emotions
that I even shed a tear.

All those things are just
memories left behind by you.
They are the last thing left of you.

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Lucid Comment by: Lucid - 2008-08-07 14:36
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Your Poem is nice. Let me tell you I know how you feel. It gets hard when the woman you love leaves. I think men take it harder when we are dumped than do a woman. But let me tell you be strong. There is someone else out there for you.
FakeSmile Comment by: FakeSmile - 2008-08-05 11:00
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as the saying goes no use crying over spilled milk!!!

treasure the memories she did give u....and move on......i know its really hard :(

but u are strong....i dont know u personally but ummm.......in your writing i can see there is alot of strength!
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