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FantasticFantasy
Raven Coleman
United States, North Carolina, Hole in the Wall

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Vice and Virtue

There were seven, and seven each,
Each with a different thing to teach.

Some were good and some were bad,
loving one could drive you mad.

Lust wanted Pride,
but she was too proud.

Pride wanted Envy,
but he was too loud.

Envy wanted Greed,
but he was to scared.

Greed wanted Gluttony
because he was all but bare.

Gluttony wanted Sloth,
so they talked on the phone.

And Wrath was left
by herself- alone.

There were seven others, and they lived above;
for they were angels and could not love.

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brokenwing Comment by: brokenwing Online- 2008-08-06 09:23
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cleverly written take on the seven deadly sins. Enjoyed it much. Thanks for sharing.
Kav Comment by: Kav - 2008-08-05 14:28
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Very skillfully written and a good take on the seven deadly sins. Thoroughly enjoyed reading this
gamer with pen Comment by: gamer with pen - 2008-08-05 11:24
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theses gods were chained to their fellings....thats kinda sad...but good writng
Psyfyman81 Comment by: Psyfyman81 - 2008-08-04 22:09
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Quote from Serenity,
"OPERATIVE: Do you know what your sin is?
MAL: No, but I'm a fan of about seven."

For some reason once I figured it out I thought of that...
jcp200817 Comment by: jcp200817 - 2008-08-04 21:34
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Ha I liked this one very much. I didn't even know I was reading about the seven deadly sins until I finished it. Great write man.
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