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Circumpolar roses flashing, the only stars within reach.
Terrorist's bombs, with wings
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Ooh, I like how you connected the roses with the explosions,
Because that reminds me of this song that tied 'White Roses' (A type of gasoline or explosive substance) and the eyes of the people in WWII I believe.
Done well :D I want to try writing a few-lined poem.
