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Walker Singleton
United States, Tx, Lubbock

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The Sixth Sense

The sound of a thousand voices
Buzzing around my head like flies
Incessant conversations that never
Cease to leave me be in silence

The vision of a thousand cherubim
Guiding me as I walk among the living
Dead man's walk that leads me on into
The darkness where I find my release

The touch of a thousand helpless souls
That plead their spirits be let go
I shall never find my place among them
In the valley of the shadow of death

The scent of a thousand candles
That lingers in the air within
My tiny room where I await the answer
To the question that holds the inevitable

The taste of a thousand parched lips
That thirst for the wine of rebirth
Inside the fathomless depths of naught
An eternal bequest in shadows of sorrow

The memory of a thousand faces
Of which my weary heart was warmed
The thought to bear upon my sleeve
Of a love that was but is no more

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Sangelshai Comment by: Sangelshai - 2008-11-17 06:18
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Beautifully done and quite relatable. I think everybody has had a time when they felt like this and to put it into words its simply a masterpiece in my opinion.
youngroyalty Comment by: youngroyalty - 2006-05-31 01:43
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"The taste of a thousand parched lips
That thirst for the wine of rebirth"
I love poems like this,this is really wonderful and channels the message right.In my view,it's perfect in the word.
Comment by: - 2006-05-14 12:39
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"The thought to bear upon my sleeve
Of a love that was but is no more"
Those are my two favorite lines. Young or old we carry a love that was but is no more. Time fades out the bad and all we remember is the good.
Spinnekop Comment by: Spinnekop - 2006-04-21 17:08
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Wonderful poetry. It has the feel of an old classic, timeless in it's composition and wording.
cmdiscenza Comment by: cmdiscenza - 2006-03-21 16:15
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lovely poem. I found myself relating to it a lot, especially that first stanza. Nicely done.
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