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| Beautifully done and quite relatable. I think everybody has had a time when they felt like this and to put it into words its simply a masterpiece in my opinion. |
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"The taste of a thousand parched lips
That thirst for the wine of rebirth"
I love poems like this,this is really wonderful and channels the message right.In my view,it's perfect in the word. |
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Comment by: - 2006-05-14 12:39
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"The thought to bear upon my sleeve
Of a love that was but is no more"
Those are my two favorite lines. Young or old we carry a love that was but is no more. Time fades out the bad and all we remember is the good. |
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| Wonderful poetry. It has the feel of an old classic, timeless in it's composition and wording. |
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| lovely poem. I found myself relating to it a lot, especially that first stanza. Nicely done. |
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