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tinaw
Tina woodrow
Canada, ont, dundalk

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Life

Life to death comes around us like a circle,
What does fate hold for us,
In the left hand-destiny,
In the right hand-determination.

We cannot live free without freedom,
It brings us both hope and dedication,
To continue the cycle from which we began,
From life to death we are commended by fate.

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redtrumpet Comment by: redtrumpet - 2008-08-09 02:22
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so finite and provoking
Artorius Comment by: Artorius - 2008-08-06 13:27
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It's very interesting, I think you did a good job.
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