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kyrasdaddy
Robert Cano
United States, TX, San Antonio

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No Turning Back

A night of passion and love,
Lust and attraction,
That has been plaguing our minds,
And has now been released

Into eternity…

Right and wrong ,
This or that, there is nothing,
Nothing exists aside from us,
And in this night we love,

And we create…

A new life is beginning,
A new heart is beating,
And God has created a new soul,
Something…beautiful,

No turning back…

But even if we could…
Would we really want to?
So love has created a life,
There is nothing wrong in this…

And we are blessed…

Blessings abound now,
From those we love,
Those we have surrounding us…
I’m not looking back…

Let us now move ahead…

We have a life to care for,
To love and admire,
To teach in the ways of right,
And, most importantly,

A life to learn from…

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Hakuna Comment by: Hakuna Online- 2008-10-17 17:43
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I enjoyed the way this piece flowed and the way you described love. Lots of feeling and well done.

Thanks much for the fine read.
Artorius Comment by: Artorius - 2008-08-06 13:25
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It's very sweet and beautiful. You did excellent in this poem, it's very moving. Great job.
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