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Kav
Kavita Trivedi
United Kingdom, London

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Big Girls Don’t Cry ©

Black clouds, hover above me,
Another day….mundane, this dreary
habitual existence awaits me

Coveted desires escape my grasp,
whispers fly, vaporised
in the frosty morning
breeze,

My tears become the ocean,
Smiles seldom warm
this disgruntled heart

Conflicted boundaries, surplus
burdens, boredom plagues me…

Stop! Enough now,

Wind, surges through me,
shakes me to the core,
arouses that forgotten spirit

I step up, reclaim my faith,

Head held high,
I am a big girl now… and big
girls don’t cry

like a raging fire, I must push
forward, rise up, reach out
into the unknown

to discover my calling….
to not settle for anything less
than butterflies



KT 06.08.08

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howard cobain Comment by: howard cobain - 2008-08-28 01:21
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o.k. i'll work on it.
ever heard of robert smith?
he doesn't wear a hat, it'd mess his backcomb up.
Kav Comment by: Kav - 2008-08-25 08:02
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Er Not really Howard as that has absolutely nothing to do with theme of this piece. Thanks for commenting anyway
howard cobain Comment by: howard cobain - 2008-08-16 06:37
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"I would break down at your feet
And beg forgiveness
Plead with you
But I know that
It's too late
And now there's nothing I can do.........."
has my "critique" improved?
Kav Comment by: Kav - 2008-08-07 01:44
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Thank you for your comments guys, means a lot! x
DavidHe Comment by: DavidHe Online- 2008-08-06 17:44
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Very good imagination with a good environmental description. I appreciate this very much. Please comment on my works. Best wishes.
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