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icy
Icy Sedgwick
United Kingdom, London

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The red front door stood wide open, thrown back in the haste of departure. Scattered clothing littered the hallway floor, leaving a trail of odd socks and forgotten shirts from the staircase to the door. Plates lay abandoned on the kitchen table, glasses knocked on their side. Empty wardrobes and chests of drawers stood open in the bedrooms, silent witnesses to the nocturnal flight.

Amelia looked around in astonishment, wondering where they’d gone. She picked through the upturned furniture, straightening the crooked pictures on the walls.

She sighed. What use was a doll’s house without dolls?

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menoh Comment by: menoh - 2008-09-07 00:30
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At first I was thinking that this was like people rushing out, abandoning their house because of like a war or something else. But I love the ending, what a great twist.
BengiLisa Comment by: BengiLisa - 2008-08-07 07:07
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I haven't read much flash fiction yet, but this is one of the better ones I've seen so far. Nice twist at the end :)
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