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Artorius
Katie Anderson
United States, Oklahoma, Enid

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A Lover's Dream

Hidden within a fantasy
Through the plains of time
Held captive in a dream
Dwells this love of mine

Far beneath the earth
Across a sea of grass
In another world
Where time does not pass

He captivates my soul
As his music sings
And pulls at my heart
With the love that it brings

He takes me with him
As we fly across the sky
Throughout his world
Where he must abide

So sweetly are his words
A rose soft touch
And his wings whisper
“I love you so much”

His eyes the bluest blue
His hair dark as night
Though I am not like him
I do believe that this is right

Held a willing prisoner
In a world that is unknown
Until the daylight breaks
And the sun is shown

So I spend my days
Wishing I could be
Forever lost with him
In his world
In a dream

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swtpoet28 Comment by: swtpoet28 - 2008-08-15 12:34
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Beautifully written poem. I can't tell you how many times I've tried to write a poem like this. Great Work : )
Kav Comment by: Kav - 2008-08-08 06:15
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Lovely. I can't think of anything else to say or what needs changing. I throughly enjoyed reading this. Keep up the good work Katie

Kavita x
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