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jcp200817
Carlos Perez
United States, NC, Dobson

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Took Away My Smile

Looking at your eyes
I see why I feel for you.
You had that look that said
I'm scared and innocent.
You seemed like someone
that I wanted to be with
but little did I know
that behind those eyes
could lay so much hate

Every time I think of you
my heart begins to beat.
Maybe its my fault
for giving up to quick.
I should have tried harder
even if it meant
that I drove you away from me
that would be better
than having to deal with
not knowing what could have been

My Life with out you has no meaning
its just so void of life.
Everything I every wanted
disappeared when you left.
You took away my soul and life
you took away all I had.


How does it fell
to know that you have
taken away someones
smile?

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Aleechea Comment by: Aleechea - 2008-08-08 06:18
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This was very deep and I liked it although there was no rhyme. Smile, you can be happy!
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