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Jypsi
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United States, NC, Charlotte

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Someitmes I Cry

Sometimes I Cry

The petals of a rose
Or a soft melody
The beauty inside
No one knows
But sometimes I cry

The touch of your love
Or a kiss from your heart
The happiness inside
You will know
But sometimes I cry

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lflwriter Comment by: lflwriter - 2008-08-08 17:49
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I get the feeling that this poem shows what the narrator wants but doesn't have and that's why the narrator sometimes cries.
Artorius Comment by: Artorius - 2008-08-08 13:06
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It's nice but I wish there was more to it, a more insight as to why you sometimes cry. What makes you?
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