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AJSmith
Adam Smith
United Kingdom, Stourport

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She is Born

Outside the hospital window,
the sun stretches its knees,
and windshield crescents catch
the light in their hooks.

I am blemished by the light
filling the bags beneath my eyes,
countering the tears
as they snake down cheek craters

that time has caverned,
and time will fill again.

New day silence permeates
my glassy eyes,
and my brain, and my heart,
until daughter-tears scatter

the sly-footed fairies
dancing on her cheeks.
I drop the DS,
and hold her in my arms,

and at once I know,
two births have occured tonight.

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Artorius Comment by: Artorius - 2008-08-09 11:27
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Ah, it's sweet. I think I would like perhaps a closer insight to this, exactly how you feel about the two of them, but that's just me, not saying that you didn't do good here, I'm just a curious person by nature and always want more. I love to learn about people, how they feel, why they feel that way. I think you did a good job here, well done.
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