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Comment by: Valerie - 2006-04-06 17:01
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Sweetly done, dear Shaft. I do agree with yeoldefart that there should
be 2nd and 3rd line inversions. Powerful stuff in just 5/7/5 words. |
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Comment by: - 2006-03-23 08:45
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| Could I possibly get a simple explanation of Haiku? |
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Comment by: - 2006-03-15 14:59
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| I have been new to the concept of Haiku the last couple of months, too. YeOldeFart has been a great reference, too. And thanks for the tip on the Haiku Web site, Shaft. I found the post you left in the forum. I look forward to reading more of your work, particularly Haiku. |
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Comment by: llonzo1 - 2006-03-14 21:37
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| I'm learning about the many varied styles and intricacies of poetry. Thanks for sharing your thoughts. |
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Comment by: shaft - 2006-03-12 12:23
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Bang on mate. Well what i'll do is rename these few as short poems or similar and maybe come back to them. I'll be experimenting with real Haiku's now, since I now know just what they are.
Thanks :-P |
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