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jcp200817
Carlos Perez
United States, NC, Dobson

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Reach Out

Created by the elements
to be fragile and frail
you try to reach out
for help but fail.

Everyday deeper and deeper
you fall into a bottomless pit
where it seems you wont be coming back.
Don't worry at the bottom a candle is lit.

As long as I'm here you'll
always have someone
to guide you through the darkness.
I'll be a candle brighter than the sun.

All you have to do is reach
our for my hand.
Have faith in yourself
and reach out to your friend.

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AJSmith Comment by: AJSmith - 2008-08-09 12:19
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This was sweet but very personal. It didnt feel adventurous enough to be as creative as it could be. The sentiments were nice and it had some good imagery. Good potential
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