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fang13bea
Hayley McNichol
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United States, Michigan, Farwell

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He kissed me
And it was like
Poetry
Written by someone
With no words

It was like
The last piece of
Chocolate
Eaten By Someone
Without any taste buds

It was like sex
Between
Two Virgins
Who hardly knew
One another

He kissed me
And I felt
Alone
Unsatisfied
And Bored

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FantasticFantasy Comment by: FantasticFantasy - 2008-08-09 15:22
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wow..... dude, that's like..........
intense.
I hate the word virgin!
XD Not sure why.
This is REALLY good. I can SO relate
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