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fang13bea
Hayley McNichol
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United States, Michigan, Farwell

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Just Plain Stupid

I’m swimming through your reality
Like a whale
That swims
Through your reality

If that's what you want.

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fang13bea Comment by: fang13bea Online- 2008-08-15 00:26
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Thank you, your compliment was a strange one but a compliment none the less.
frees340 Comment by: frees340 - 2008-08-13 06:52
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wow. Very dumb, very smart, and very whale. niceley done, im not sure.
fang13bea Comment by: fang13bea Online- 2008-08-12 09:01
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I don't even remember your original comment. But it didn't offend me, that I would remember.
FantasticFantasy Comment by: FantasticFantasy - 2008-08-11 16:03
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psssssssh
XD nice!
fang13bea Comment by: fang13bea Online- 2008-08-10 10:56
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idk, i told him i was santa claus
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