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zookeepers wife
christina rothenbeck
United States, WV, Morgantown

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An Alphabetical Bestiary

Animals adapt, age after age.
Aardvarks may take humanity's place someday.
After all, all can change.
Evolutionarily speaking,
apparently anomalous aptitudes and
traits shape advancing generations:
What adapts, remains.
What cannot change, disappears.
Imagine adoring parental apes, ages ago,
astonished at bearing bare babies!
Clearly, many strangenesses are awarded permanency.

Inside electric eels, stacked
electroplaques produce one ampere currents:
the eel, weirdly electric, charges itself
enough to fell a horse, preferring however
other prey. Perhaps bioluminescent lanternfish
hide their shine under convenient kelp
when one passes.
They have rendered themselves supremely
untouchable; the exact electrocution mechanism,
however, remains largely mysterious.

Meanwhile, bird extinction is increasing, especially in Hawaii,
in which multitudinous now-extinct species originally lived.
This isn't Flexiraptor's quiet pre-historical
annihilation, simply fading into oblivion.
Flightless island species in particular risk extinction.
Non-native species invade fragile territory,
kill everything in sight.
In addition, humanity kills indiscriminately
Seemingly everything it finds.

Zoos ostensibly protect from oblivion
ocelots, otters, mountain lions.
Often, illusions of control or ownership dominate discourse.
Following logic, contained populations
Could reconstitute worlds untouched, unspoiled.
Not Tacoma Pocket Gopher,
Goff's Pocket Gopher,
Louisiana Vole,
Newfoundland Wolf,
Wisconsin Cougar,
Mongollon Mountains wolf (from Arizona),
or thousands of unnoticed others.

Gutting nature fuels business industry.
Our resources usurped unthinkingly, guzzled:
over-hunted, overused.
But un-dying occurs: Lazarus unbelievably pulls through,
found under unlikely auspices.
Documents, naturally updated, include
miraculous population resurgences.
Uniform success runs through our thoughts,
but crumbles under doubt.
Unless understanding occurs spontaneously,
humanity usually just undoes universal truths.

Myth's years beyond your inventory, unfortunately.
You analyze. Physics yawns broadly.
Deny ordinary prosody.
Simply nullify your vocabulary.
Bay. Yes, yelp your lustily yowling yahoos beyond valleys!
Yearn. Yawp. Yell.
Revivify mythological liturgy.
Pray holy acolyte's litany.
Proselytize.
Fly. Defy gravity.
Only say acceptingly, 'yes, everything!'
Crazy? Maybe.
Try anyway.

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mantaraytx Comment by: mantaraytx - 2007-06-28 17:07
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I think this is a really amazing amalgam of poetry and prose, an alluring piece of arresting animal anecdotes. Eloquent and effervescent, there's an electricity to these elegant words... It inspires with its importance and intimidates with its inimitable imagination. Oh, what opaline opinions were offered... Unquestionably unique and an unmistakable display of uberty. Yes, I'm yellow with envy. You should be proud!
DriftwoodWriter Comment by: DriftwoodWriter - 2007-04-16 14:18
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My God... I... I love you... and how you play with the vowels... I... marry me.. No... no.. you'd just hate me... Oh love at last, how it twists me. How the hell does one manage to play with words so well, and still manage a meaning so deeply?

God. Such harnessed talent. I kneel in the wake of your poetry.

"Animals adapt, age after age.
Aardvarks may take humanity??s place someday."

God help us all.
felinalunekavi Comment by: felinalunekavi - 2007-03-28 12:13
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this is extremely interesting to dissect. i have an investigative pull to the way i read...particularly with poetry...and this poem delighted my insights.

the title clued me in to what fashioned your words: AEIOU and Y. but i didn't catch it until the Y stanza. the first stanza is particularly appealing, it has wisdom in its own right.
Lucy Lepchani Comment by: Lucy Lepchani - 2007-03-12 03:53
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Love this. Strong prose-style, could take a good edit to bring it closer to non-prose poetry, and without losing the essential energy and alchemy of the piece. Less can be more.
normal jeane Comment by: normal jeane - 2006-12-14 11:23
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I LOVE your vocabulary and how you manage to work words into your work that one doesnt usually see. I enjoyed this very much, your opinions and the knowledge I gained from your piece.

:)

best wishes, normal jeane
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