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Holly Sue Kay
Holly April Fedrick
United States, Mississippi, Jackson

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Loving you

Feeling alone and not seeing the hope I sit thinking
I’ve felt worry and pain but now as I look at you I feel hope
The pleasure and bliss comes rushing in pushing away the hurt
The distressing feelings withdrawal from me when I look into your eyes

I sense only the warmth of your smile
I feel happy and carefree when you come around
My heartbeat accelerates at the very thought of you
I feel the love you have for my every time I look into your eyes

As I search my heart all I find is the devotion I have for you
It swallows me up in its affection for you
When my mind wonders it always ends up thinking of you
I find myself missing you when your away

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Holly Sue Kay Comment by: Holly Sue Kay - 2008-10-19 13:46
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thank y'all
Robnessa Comment by: Robnessa - 2008-10-19 12:37
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A good piece.
Hakuna Comment by: Hakuna Online- 2008-10-16 15:25
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I enjoyed reading this. Very touching.

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