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DavidHe
David He
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China, Pinliang, Pingliang

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Rain and Umbrella

A rainy fall day
Drops beat on my umbrella
Their rhythm stirs me

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DavidHe Comment by: DavidHe Online- 2008-08-21 18:12
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Thansk, Apheliac, for the nice comment. How to write Haiku well remains a big problem to me.
Apheliac Comment by: Apheliac - 2008-08-21 08:12
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Simple. Well written. I want it to rain!
DavidHe Comment by: DavidHe Online- 2008-08-14 02:02
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Thanks for the encouragement, Bebe. Best regards.
bebelestrange Comment by: bebelestrange - 2008-08-13 19:01
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Your haiku has a beautiful beat to it and makes me appreciate the rain, David. Thank you.
DavidHe Comment by: DavidHe Online- 2008-08-11 16:41
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Thanks very much, Pj. Best wishes.
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