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DavidHe
David He
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China, Pinliang, Pingliang

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The Sun and Raindrops

A sudden shower
Raindrops glisten like diamonds
Windowpanes of sun

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DavidHe Comment by: DavidHe Online- 2008-09-02 19:47
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Thank you very much, Bebe. I will try to be better. Best wishes.
bebelestrange Comment by: bebelestrange - 2008-09-02 08:19
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David, your perception of nature is commendable. Love your haiku style. Thank you, Bebe
karjon Comment by: karjon Online- 2008-08-29 19:06
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'Windowpanes of sun' - that's gorgeous.

Okay - I'll stop with the haikus, though you are obviously very good at them, which makes me think you'd find the Wee Challenges easy. Join in, then I can definitely, absolutely, promise to help where I can.

Cheers

Karen

(And thank you for sending me off to bed with lovely images in my head.)
MorganO Comment by: MorganO Online- 2008-08-28 06:56
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Hi David, I thouroughly enjoy all youe haikus but I think this one is my favorite, beautiful scene. And thanks for the comments on mine, I'm new to haikus so any suggestions are welcome, I really enjoy your work.
DavidHe Comment by: DavidHe Online- 2008-08-18 20:52
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Dear Autodepressive, thanks for the response. In fact I was very pleased with your comment. I sincerely invited you to help me write. I have read your works and I enjoy them very much. Thanks again. Best wishes.
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