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I Don't Know You Anymore
I don't know you anymore.
You're not the person I once knew.
Something's changed, that's for sure.
Is it me or is it you?
I hate how you make me feel.
I hate that you make me cry, but you don't know.
I hate how nothing seems real.
I hate how we always seem to have a row.
I've been replaced, or so it seems.
I don't know what to do.
You hurt me, even in my dreams.
I no longer know you.
You're not the same person that I met.
It's ever so clear, not just to me.
That you have just become so different.
It's you not me, I can finally see.
I've not changed, it's you.
You're just different, that's for sure.
You're not the person I once knew.
I don't know you anymore.
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| i really like this. i love the way through expressing how you feel throughout the poem you come to a decision about the person and that its them thats changed. you really show the frustration of the persona or yourself. |
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| I absolutely love this. I don't mind that you don't say how the person changed or how you feel about them? That leaves it up to us, the readers, to decided. And I liked it. I used context clues to try to figure that out and it made a lot of sense to me. Keep up the good work Kara. |
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| It's good but I didn't get much feeling from this. How is this person not the same? How do you feel about it? |
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