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FantasticFantasy
Raven Coleman
United States, North Carolina, Hole in the Wall

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Boooored

Be frank, be honest- just be you!
It's all I could ever ask you to do.

Don't be fake, don't lie to me,
be whoever YOU want to be.

I wrote this crap, because I was bored.
My cat scratched me. I stubbed my toe on the door.

Apple, doorknob, horsie, mop.
Your mom, your mom, your mom, cop.

:D masterpiece.

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thatonekid Comment by: thatonekid - 2008-08-28 23:19
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nice
FantasticFantasy Comment by: FantasticFantasy - 2008-08-13 14:37
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dude, idk!
XD I was like bored outta mah freakin mind so I just wrote some crap that rhymed.
I have no idea why anyone takes in seriously.
lmao
gamer with pen Comment by: gamer with pen - 2008-08-13 14:35
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Nice and upbeat! I was bored just a sec ago...not now!

whats with "your mom"?
rudegrrl Comment by: rudegrrl - 2008-08-13 04:51
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I bet you were not bored when you wrote this? Boredom obviously brings out the best in you? At least you've still got a healthy sense of humour...I like it because it's fun and I very much feel your mood when you wrote it....thank you for the smiles...I love the way you start babbling at the end....:-} brilliant because it starts off serious and honest and no I won't lie to you
fang13bea Comment by: fang13bea Online- 2008-08-12 09:08
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Well this is certainly interesting. A masterpiece most certainly.
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