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wgallant
Wayne Gallant
United States, FL, Morriston

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McGuff

I heard her softly crying from behind a stack of boxes at the back of the dressing room area. There she was, lying on the floor, curled into a ball, shivering.

She must have been very frightened, sensing her enemies all around, hearing them, smelling them. I picked her up and wrapped her in my overcoat. I've got to get her out of here, I thought. But how? There were side and rear exits, but I knew that there would be security and guard dogs watching them. The only way was through the arena and straight out the front.

Holding her close, I started down the long aisle in front of the gallery. The arena floor was to my right, and some eight or ten feet lower, but I still could see the fangs, the teeth, the claws. The walk to the end of the arena seemed to take an eternity.

At last we entered the foyer, passed through the great entrance door and out onto the street.

I saw a line of waiting taxis at the sidewalk as I passed beneath the marquee. Large electric letters announced, "Eastminster Dog Show."

Safe at last. The kitten in my coat pocket started to purr.

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wgallant Comment by: wgallant - 2008-08-21 19:42
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Thula - read what wikipedia has to say at
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/MacGuffin
Thula7 Comment by: Thula7 - 2008-08-21 18:50
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Oh, I read this when there were only 2 comments. Thought I had commented then, guess not. Sorry. I really quite like this piece. I sort of figured at the beginning it was a puppy or a kitten. Obviously a kitten once the dog show concept was introduced, but well written. It left me feeling happy. Now help me with my concept of the McGuffin, please. I read the others who posted, and I just don't think I have it.
heidiheimler Comment by: heidiheimler - 2008-08-13 04:01
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Clever piece - held my attention from start to finish. Well done!
pj Comment by: pj - 2008-08-13 00:50
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very interesting line of writing kept me in my toes from start to finish , nail biting loved it. Keep it up .
mynamelez Comment by: mynamelez Online- 2008-08-12 22:25
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Kitty McGruff does not like the dog shows. A quaint little story with a good McGuffin revelation
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