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frees340
Vyasar Ganesan
United States, TX, Austin

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Wee Challenge 43: Crash Course

“LEFT!” Mr.Roberts' scream shattered my focus, and the word invaded my body like a shock. My hands wrenched the wheel, and we missed the flaming barrels.

“Sorry, sir! I can‘t find the answer!”

Mr.Roberts laughed. “Ah, you have to decode the regexes!”

Furious, I swerved hard enough to de-bone a walrus. “What! I didn’t lose the documentation!”

Mr.Roberts pointed to the melting codebook in the backseat. “But how will you get to it, my dear student?”

Roaring, I abandoned the wheel and dove backwards, laptop in hand. Flipping through, I found and entered the code, returning to a collapsing building about to destroy us.

Flattening the pedal, I cried, “I think it’s compiling, sir!”

The building smashed behind us, as we halted aside the training building. Breathing heavily, I showed him the screen. Mr.Roberts blinked, then grinned.

“I guess you pass, huh?”

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frees340 Comment by: frees340 - 2008-08-18 21:01
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I think i fixed it, vickie!
vlclasby Comment by: vlclasby - 2008-08-18 20:56
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This was was non-stop action. I wasn't sure what was going on, but it was moving so fast! Like a video game.

I think I was confused by the formal use of sir, interspersed with calling the instructor by his first name. Made it seem like it was two different people. Had to read it a couple more times to get that straight. Perhaps if you called him Mr. Roberts (or Mr. Smith for a more Matrix-like touch.)
frees340 Comment by: frees340 - 2008-08-12 16:30
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Yes, ok, fine, it should be the.
phillmag Comment by: phillmag Online- 2008-08-12 16:13
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Nice work. I had to google regexes and found out a lot about computer blat. I also wondered about "of", thought it should be "the."
Arley Comment by: Arley - 2008-08-12 10:07
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A touch of The Matrix, eh? I'm confused by OF FLAMING BARRELS. Is OF supposed to be some other word?
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